Aoba (S)

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  Posted on July 25, 2009 23:00
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I have finally decided to rework my favorite character that I made.

Aoba Yamashiro was my second character. Now I made another similar version of him.

It's been 8 months since I made him. I believe that my skills changed dramatically. =)

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  Posted on July 25, 2009 23:02
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I suggest to post it at Naruto-Boards.com this is a Bleach based Forum
  Posted on July 25, 2009 23:03
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Nice quality cleanup...

Very Balanced...Nice clean text...you get a 9.5/10
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  Posted on July 25, 2009 23:03
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i like it! 7 .
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  Posted on July 25, 2009 23:04
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Sharigan(S) wrote:
I suggest to post it at Naruto-Boards.com this is a Bleach based Forum

I suggest you don't spam. This is the OTHER CHARACTERS section, created for a purpose.

@Ken; Thanks! :smile
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  Posted on July 25, 2009 23:05
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hyuugaitachi007 wrote:
Sharigan(S) wrote:
I suggest to post it at Naruto-Boards.com this is a Bleach based Forum

I suggest you don't spam. This is the OTHER CHARACTERS section, created for a purpose.

@Ken; Thanks! :smile
Its a suggestion i said. :oh No one is forcing you.
Overall: 7/10
  Posted on July 25, 2009 23:05
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true move 2 naruto-boards than bleach >=-p:smile
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  Posted on July 25, 2009 23:05
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well its not hard to tell you good at making chars . one sujestion mabey boost up grand fireball by 10 dmg, i give #1 10/10 #2 was a bit confusing and not great quality but ill give it a 7.8/10
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  Posted on July 25, 2009 23:07
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hyuugaitachi007 wrote:
Sharigan(S) wrote:
I suggest to post it at Naruto-Boards.com this is a Bleach based Forum

I suggest you don't spam. This is the OTHER CHARACTERS section, created for a purpose.

@Ken; Thanks! :smile
very true
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  Posted on July 25, 2009 23:08
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Nice job balancing the character, skills are original and synergize well, 8/10.
(don't mind Sharigan, he is just pissy from his topic). Keep it up, and do you have a character showcase?
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  Posted on July 25, 2009 23:09
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ive always been a fan of you hyuugaitachi (Wary)

8/10 pretty darn creative
I have no non Entity gfx lol.

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  Posted on July 25, 2009 23:10
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it is still a very good character :tounge

so im giving it a 10 ( dont have anything to complain about
(well you could post it on N-B but i see how you react on that:tounge)

nah just kidding 10 is a 10 and it wont change

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  Posted on July 25, 2009 23:10
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DeadSight wrote:
Nice job balancing the character, skills are original and synergize well, 8/10.
(don't mind Sharigan, he is just pissy from his topic). Keep it up, and do you have a character showcase?
Yeah... It's on the first post. hehe.

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  Posted on July 25, 2009 23:11
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it looks pretty cool
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  Posted on July 25, 2009 23:13
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Nice improvement, 8/10 overall.
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