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Posted on July 25, 2009 23:00

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I have finally decided to rework my favorite character that I made.

Aoba Yamashiro was my second character. Now I made another similar version of him.

It's been 8 months since I made him. I believe that my skills changed dramatically. =)

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OLD: (This got over 20 TEN's.)

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Posted on July 25, 2009 23:02

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I suggest to post it at Naruto-Boards.com this is a Bleach based Forum

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Posted on July 25, 2009 23:03

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Nice quality cleanup...

Very Balanced...Nice clean text...you get a 9.5/10

You better fucking believe I'm back.

Posted on July 25, 2009 23:03

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i like it! 7 .

Posted on July 25, 2009 23:04

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Quote by Sharigan(S)

I suggest to post it at Naruto-Boards.com this is a Bleach based Forum

I suggest you don't spam. This is the OTHER CHARACTERS section, created for a purpose.

@Ken; Thanks!

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Posted on July 25, 2009 23:05

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Quote by hyuugaitachi007

Quote by Sharigan(S)

I suggest to post it at Naruto-Boards.com this is a Bleach based Forum

I suggest you don't spam. This is the OTHER CHARACTERS section, created for a purpose.

@Ken; Thanks!

Its a suggestion i said.

No one is forcing you.
Overall: 7/10

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Posted on July 25, 2009 23:05

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true move 2 naruto-boards than bleach >=-p

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Posted on July 25, 2009 23:05

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well its not hard to tell you good at making chars . one sujestion mabey boost up grand fireball by 10 dmg, i give #1 10/10 #2 was a bit confusing and not great quality but ill give it a 7.8/10

Posted on July 25, 2009 23:07

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Quote by hyuugaitachi007

Quote by Sharigan(S)

I suggest to post it at Naruto-Boards.com this is a Bleach based Forum

I suggest you don't spam. This is the OTHER CHARACTERS section, created for a purpose.

@Ken; Thanks!

very true

Posted on July 25, 2009 23:08

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#10

Nice job balancing the character, skills are original and synergize well, 8/10.
(don't mind Sharigan, he is just pissy from his topic). Keep it up, and do you have a character showcase?

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Posted on July 25, 2009 23:09

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#11

ive always been a fan of you hyuugaitachi (Wary)

8/10 pretty darn creative

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Posted on July 25, 2009 23:10

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#12

it is still a very good character

so im giving it a 10 ( dont have anything to complain about
(well you could post it on N-B but i see how you react on that

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nah just kidding 10 is a 10 and it wont change

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Posted on July 25, 2009 23:10

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#13

Quote by DeadSight

Nice job balancing the character, skills are original and synergize well, 8/10.
(don't mind Sharigan, he is just pissy from his topic). Keep it up, and do you have a character showcase?

Yeah... It's on the first post. hehe.

But thanks.. check out my whole naruto collection and my avatar... too.. links in siggy.

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Posted on July 25, 2009 23:11

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