The Legacy: Chapter 15 - Survival of the Frontier

 Topic: The Legacy: Chapter 15 - Survival of the Frontier
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  Posted on April 25, 2009 18:54
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“Thank God, you’re OK!” cried out the young man knelt over Flashy’s body. He lowered himself to embrace the bloody and beaten pirate. “I prayed for your life and you returned.”

“Prayed, eh?” Flashy’s eyes were languid and cold. “Such a waste of time on a man such as myself…” Flashy whimpered.

“No! Prayer is never wasted! Prayers always go heard when they are given with all your heart. It’s just like Father…”the young man was cut off by the voice of a slowly approaching shadow.

“Are you OK?” Garrinski asked, standing over both men. Flashy didn’t meet the concerned look with any form of acknowledgement other than a weak nod. He attempted to roll over to his side, but this just caused him to tense up from the terrible wound on his back. “Relax, we’ll help you up.” Garrinski stated. Nicholas was already at the smaller man’s side lifting him up. “What exactly happened here today?”

“I’m sorry, but I don’t know much.” said the young one. His light brown eyes jostled around in his head as if to search for the appropriate response. “They came from the south, and had us surrounded before I even came outside. Everyone gathered in the main hall and just waited. We heard the screams coming from outside and then a few minutes later, Th-they came in. That man, the captain, he killed them all, one by one.” the young man’s eyes began to sadly reflect after this statement, before he looked back at Garrinski. “But then you people came, and saved me. I don’t mean to be intrusive, but what were you doing way out here? You don’t seem like a commercial or military crew.”

“We’re actually traveling to find someone right now, for a friend of ours,” Garrinski said. Sam grinned a bit at this comment and began collecting his accoutrements. “But who are you and where were you heading?”

“Oh, forgive me please. My name is Solo. Solo Noten. I’m um, well sort of a…traveler of sorts.” Solo said. His hand was nervously stroking the back of his head, as he stumbled upon his words. “Well, I do travel, but not really. I mean it’s like this. I sorta go around and help people with their problems. Not problems I mean, like help them find God. Geez, I can’t remember what he called it. It’s like…”

Solo was cut off once again. “Ah, you’re a missionary. But, aren’t you a little young to be doing such work?” Garrinski questioned. Solo formed a weak smile and proceeded to laugh in the same suit.

“Yeah…I don’t really know how they reached that consensus either, but it’s a great honor! I know I’m the youngest to be sent from the monastery, it’s just that I had…to…leave.” Solo quickly changed his tone to a more joyful one. “I must give you my eternal gratitude though for saving me. He really does provide in the most mysterious ways. If it wouldn’t be too much trouble, as you can see I’m sort of out of transportation and I could really use some help. I mean, uhhh, if it wouldn’t be too much trouble I’d really appreciate…I understand if you don’t have room or anything, it’s just that…”

“You’re welcome to come with us, until you reach an appropriate destination.” Garrinski said. He began to laugh at the younger man’s attempt of persuasion. “I certainly hope for your sake, you’re better at converting than you are at asking for safe passage.”

“We need to leave now.” Vash stated coldly as he made his way back towards the Legacy. “We’re still nearly a week from the island and I from the swordsman’s ragged breathing I can tell his situation has only worsened.”

The Legacy crew collected and salvaged what they could from the deck of the passenger ship, before making their way aboard their ship. Before they could clear the empty transport vessel a voice called out from atop the ship’s cabin.
“Wait.” came the familiar voice.

“Well it’s about time you come out.” Garrinski announced, turning to the man standing atop the ship’s roof. “I take it you could use a working ship as well.”

The man who stood on top of the passenger ship now looked on the Legacy crew with a blank impassive stare. Deep blue eyes, rigidly locked onto Garrinski’s immobile form. In the dark encroaching evening glow, the man’s dark brown hair was nearly indistinguishable except when it’s curly strands would blow across his face. He was certainly a larger man, taller than most. His clothing was all simply tailored, except for the murky jacket he wore. In his hand was a large metal case and across his chest a black strap.

“I’d be much appreciative if I could accompany you.” came a voice to everyone’s ears. It didn’t sound distant, or from the man who now stood alone, but all except Garrinski seemed to be baffled by the mysterious voice.

“That’s quite the interesting talent you have their,” Garrinski said to the statuesque man.

Red slowly began to understand the meaning of this comment. “You mean, this man…”

“Yes. I’ve been watching your crew since you came to this ship’s aid. I know you have no ill intentions. At least not at the moment” the voice calmly came again.

“If I may ask…”Garrinski stopped his vocalization and continued to ponder on the rest of his question.

“You may address me as ‘Ray’ if you need.” came Ray’s actual voice to the distant ears before him.

“Another person made it.” whispered Solo to himself, looking on in amazement at the other survivor before him.

The Legacy crew members each had their own way of showing their interest in the ship’s new passengers while others had none.

“We should make haste now, Mr. Garrinski. Mr. Flashy is still in critical need of medical treatment and I’m sure Mr. Sam could also use some rest.” Nicholas said. He carried Flashy back aboard the Legacy with Crazy in tow.

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The crew left the desolate passenger ship. In the coming twilight of the night sky the ship remained like a shadowy blot amid the center of the sea. A steadily rising and falling mound of timber and metal. The grave of all those lost at sea that day was left unmarked, except for the designation on the ship’s side. Here lied The Frontier.

Incredulous of his new passengers, Vash took no interest in inquiring any information from either of them. Garrinski and Nicholas who were maintaining the ship’s redirected destination kept a careful watch over all on board. Red worked below the ship’s main deck, repairing the damage suffered from the day’s long battle and keeping an eye on his two bed stricken comrades. At the rear of the ship, Crazy looked out at the endless darkening waters.

No body could sense or see the what Crazy gazed at for the next few hours. Slowly drifting further and further behind The Legacy was a lone small sailboat. Crazy could see the floating object miles behind them, but knew not what to make of the tiny craft. He simply watched in curiosity until his keen eyes could see it no longer.

On the side of the ship Ray stood alone looking up at the cloud scattered horizon. The air was chilly, but the wind was hardly strong enough to soften the voices of the men who sailed that night.

Solo cautiously approached the quiet man resting at the ship’s railing. “E-Excuse me sir. I was wo-wondering.” Solo stuttered. Ray turned to the younger man, eyeing him over very carefully.

“You’re wondering how I made it out of their alive.” came Ray’s voice. His lips remained shut and he looked back out towards the sky.

“How do you do that?” Solo asked with genuine puzzlement in his voice. Ray remained silent for a long time, scanning vacantly out at the natural world around him.

“People aren’t difficult to understand. Their tones, their mannerisms, their actions all contribute to telling what that person is doing or thinking or thinking about doing. You understand what I’m telling you?” Ray asked turning back to Solo. “No, and you’re still wondering how I can still project my voice inside of other people’s heads. I wouldn’t think about it too much. The ‘how’ will always fall short of answering the greater questions that burden us.” Solo searched his thoughts for a moment, before looking back at the wavy haired man beside him. “That’s right, it’s the ‘why’ that we keep seeking answers for.” Ray’s telepathic voice said. “You seek the answers of a higher power, while I seek it out in each and every person I meet. We ask ourselves ‘Why are things the way they are?’. You’re honest, but try to lie about your uncertainty. You make me wonder why as well.”

“Heh, that’s my job I guess.” Solo cheerfully pointed out. “I know I don’t know much about the scriptures and teachings of the Divinity, but I do my best. I think that’s all you can really do, you know? I mean it’s like this crew. They fought against pirates that were so strong and had such frightening power and for what?” Solo, stopped himself. “I guess you’re right, I just don’t know why.” Solo laughed a bit heartily. “I think He definitely had something to do with it though.”

“Sometimes it’s human nature to do what doesn’t make any sense.” Ray said. His empty façade was starting to put Solo at much unease. “I still haven’t found the answer to that problem either.”

“You know when you can’t find answers or understand problems the correct way, it’s okay to have a little faith.” Solo said, beaming with a quaint smile. Ray looked at the shorter blond man for another few seconds.

“…I don’t know how to respond to that. I’ve yet to find the purpose of this basis known as ‘faith’.” Ray stated coldly.

“Hrm…well if you do, let me know as well, alrighty?” Solo asked cheerfully, patting Ray on the shoulder. Ray left to the railing of the ship and descended to the living quarters below.

The days that past as the Legacy cleared the Orange Straight and made their way to the island destination of the tribal healer, were peaceful. Every crewmen attended to their own elected duties and the passengers had even began taking part in the daily routines and rituals of the odd crew. On the sixth day in the late morning a small outline loomed in the horizon.

Red rushed below the ship to alert his ill mentor of the spotted landmass only to find him in a mild fit of coughing and struggling to reach a glass of water. Sam’s hand shook as he took the drink and carefully tried to administer some liquid relief to his aching body. Red froze in the doorway not knowing whether to enter the room or sneak back out down the hall. The hope for Sam’s treatment now lay only a few miles away and time was surely starting to become the crew’s greatest enemy.

-End of Chapter 15
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  Posted on April 25, 2009 19:00
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your storys are always good man:amused
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looks good :amused

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Hehe, well it might be harder to get into the story at this point. I'll always recommend readers start off from the beginning, but I do think each chapter is easy enough, and enjoyable to read on it's own. Check out the discussion thread if you have any questions or want to give feedback. Thanks for the compliments all the same.
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I got a question. Are you considering being a professional story writer, because I recommend it.

Also youll love the Vash I drew for you.
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  Posted on April 26, 2009 22:08
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Izuisima wrote:
I got a question. Are you considering being a professional story writer, because I recommend it.

Also youll love the Vash I drew for you.

I cannot flippin wait for those man XD

Hehe, it's tough because I don't want any of my character descriptions to throw off what you may already have completed, lol.
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  Posted on April 26, 2009 23:32
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ok, Im gonna draw more (all characters and give you the links to put here. I'll also put them in my showcase.

- When I draw them, what do you want them to be doing? (poses, straight shot, face shot, etc.)
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Izuisima wrote:
ok, Im gonna draw more (all characters and give you the links to put here. I'll also put them in my showcase.

- When I draw them, what do you want them to be doing? (poses, straight shot, face shot, etc.)

Body shots preferably, each in just some sort of pose or position that would come most natural to them. Straight shots would definately leave less to the imagination.
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  Posted on May 5, 2009 21:58
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Heres a sample, tell me what you want done to it so i can draw him more like you invisioned him to be, this was a quick draw so sorry if it looks a little crappy
ill try to scan it also next time:push

I present to you, VASH

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Izuisima wrote:
Heres a sample, tell me what you want done to it so i can draw him more like you invisioned him to be, this was a quick draw so sorry if it looks a little crappy
ill try to scan it also next time:push

I present to you, VASH

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Amazing man, I sent you the PM. Thanks again, that's just....wow!!
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