The Legacy: Chapter 14- At the Threshold

 Topic: The Legacy: Chapter 14- At the Threshold
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  Posted on April 22, 2009 01:25
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“We have to get Flashy away from him,” Garrinski stated to the crewmen present.

Sam’s eyes were glued to his swords, now hovering just a few yards above his head.

“You death will come by your own blades.” said Lyod faintly. His left arm was outreached to the two floating swords now above the Legacy crew.

“What’s goin’ on here?” Nicholas questioned, bedazzled by the ghostly display above him.

Garrinski’s eyes flared open as the hooded man before him motioned his arm downward.

“Look out!” Garrinski yelled.

Sam rolled to his side, as his katana buried itself into the ship’s deck. Nicholas had blocked the black sword with the protective plating on his gauntlets and was now trying his best to impede the invisible force that was pushing it against his form with full strength. After a few seconds of this struggle, a powerful tug was felt at Nicholas’ arms. His gauntlets were being pulled by something! Before he could react, the large man was thrown to the midsection of the ship. Head first, he was projected into the ship’s main hall, through it’s outer wall. Crazy ran to the aid of his ally, stumbling from the fresh wounds in his leg and side.

“Weapons will do us no good…” Garrinki said, looking at Sam who was holding his implanted katana firmly, trying to rise to his feet.

“What? What do you mean?” Sam asked. His voice was gruffer than normal, due to his recent medical relapse.

“This man, Lyod Estagon. He’s definitely different from any ordinary man.” Garrinski began to explain.

“That goes without saying at this point buddy.” Sam responded.

“Well to put it simply, this Admiral has an affinity with magnetism.” continued Garrinski.

“Simply that would mean?” asked Sam, looking puzzled.

“We’re dealing with a man who can control metal objects.” Garrinski stated. “Now would be a great time to thrown away anything that he might be able to use against us.” Garrinski eyed Sam’s sword for a moment, before his attention shiftied back at the admiral. The deck shook violently for a moment and a loud cracking could be heard by all on the passenger vessel.

“Sam! We’re back.” called out Red. Red and Vash had finally sailed their commandeered ship right into the rear deck of the ship. They jumped down and rushed to the rest of the Legacy crew. Before the two men could come with twenty feet of Garrinski and Sam, a piercing noise could be heard below them. In a crash of wood and dust, the giant anchor that had rested a floor below everyone’s feet had reappeared into the air once again. Lyod was intently focused on hitting his target this time and with both hands he motioned the enormous metal shard at Vash and Red. Although the speed seemed to be increased from when Garrinski had evaded it the first time before, the two men had no problem eluding any potential damage.

“In the presence of an Immortal and you refuse to cease. The futility of your actions will now be realized.” Lyod announced. He motioned with his right hand to the sword now gripped by Sam. Into the air the swordsman was hoisted, clinging to his precious blade. The anchor came out of the deck once again as well, directly behind Sam.

Red called out, but it was too late. The burly blacksmith was sent flying with a crushing blow from the massive ship anchor. His body flew over the side of the ship and into the sea. Garrinski made one step towards the railing before he stopped. In a blur of motion Red rushed over the side of the ship and disappeared from sight.

“Enough! You retrieve the wounded, I’ll claim this man’s head.” Vash growled at Garrinski. Nicholas had emerged from the wrecked wall, with Crazy carefully propping him up. A voice came to Vash’s ears, but it was to go ignored by the blind man. Sword after sword levitated and launched itself at the quickly advancing Vash. He skillfully deflected and dodged each unmanned attack sent his way and prepared for his eminent attack. Lyod raised his head into the air a bit allowing the hood resting over his head to slowly slip back. Both hands pulled down the top of the blackened cloak until a mound of grey hair could be seen. Garrinski looked on as the scythe wielded in Vash’s hands came closer and closer to it’s intended target.

“Enough of this,” Lyod said, closing his eyes. Vash let out a roar as he swung his scythe around his side. The black robe which was intricately decorated with silver and gold disks was suddenly left barren. A collection of eight luminous disks had taken to the air and come to meet Vash’s blow before it could reach within a foot of the Admiral’s head. “You waste of life, you’re in my way.” Vash could feel a pulling of his scythe. Realizing his defenseless position, Vash attempted a hasty retreat. In vain he managed to avoid the first of many incoming razor like plates. Now on the deck floor Vash turned his head to the circular blades about to tear into him. He bled freely now from a deep gash on his shoulder and as he tried to raise his body erect, the pressure and pain he experienced removed the bracing limb from beneath him. There was no time to escape it now. Incoming was a saw edged disk that could severe any part of his body from the rest. Vash sensed his end and it wasn’t until a moment later that feeling was put to rest.

The clang of metal being struck over and over rang out in the blind man’s ears. Garrinski was now in front of his fallen comrade, deflecting the hovering swarm of metal all around them both. Lyod’s eyes hardened at the display and he continued thrusting his arms in a myriad sprawl, sending aerial attacks at the two crewmen from every possible angle. Vash slowly made it to his feet, but was concerning himself only with the man who was positioned in front of him.

“What is this?” Vash asked disdainfully.

“His power to control metal material, puts us at a slight disadvantage, well must of us anyway.” Garrinski said.

“Not that you fool. I didn’t ask for you to step in and you put his life at risk.” Vash motioned to Flashy.

“He’s still breathing, as you are. But only one of you can stand, so get up and stay alive.” Garrinski said, sounding annoyed by the blind man’s objection.

Nicholas had regained his composure and was now at Flashy’s side. Crazy waited for his friend by the edge of the ship, watching Nicholas scoop their fallen ally off the deck and turn back to center of the ship. Lyod had taken notice of this scene and redirected his focus to the giant man retreating away. Garrinski had also realized this potential risk well before Lyod take notice and made a quick advance into the path of Nicholas and Flashy. He managed to prevent any substantial damage, but an elusive disk did manage to get by and cut Nicholas directly above his right heel. Flashy rolled off Nicholas’ shoulder and across the deck, still motionless. Garrinski was beginning to break into a hot sweat. The effort put forth to stop the powerful projectiles was too much for him to sustain longer than a few more strikes.

“Your life will soon give way to the toil of your weak body.” Lyod said with cold satisfaction. The disks that were hovering in front of Garrinski began to slowly drift away. “You’ve impeded my path long enough, I shall kill you all at once and secure my place among the Immortals.” A single disk floated to each of the Legacy crew members, four still surrounding Garrinski. Lyod was now reaching both his arms out, conducting the intricate scene as it unfolded.

“Stop!” came a loud, but soft voice. In the entranceway to the main hall stood a lone boy. He was probably in his teens, but looked incredibly youthful and delicate for his size. His face was tender, but contorted at the sight before him. Garrinski recognized this young fellow from before. The same hostage Flashy and him had saved earlier before, now stood with clenched hands glaring at Lyod. The Admiral took notice right away. “You must stop this now! You’ll never be forgiven if you kill them too.” the boy looked deeply upset. An uncontrollable shaking was taking place throughout his body. Tears swelled up in his already puffy eyes. “Please don’t… just don’t kill them…” his voice was cracking up now and what started out as a demand, broke into a whole hearted plea.

“Stand back,”came a voice to the young man’s ears. “He’s going to stop him now.” The young man looked up at the sky in wonderment. His mind was fleeting, as he searched for this omnipotent voice among the heavens. Dusk was quickly approaching and the cool setting colors of the distant sun illuminated the sky with deep reds and purples. The twinkle of many stars were already clearly visible and as he searched for his answer the voice returned once again. “No, I’m not who you seek, but the men before you still fighting are stronger than they appear. They just might be able to survive this.”

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  Posted on April 22, 2009 01:25
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In the waters below the ship Red swam desperately to reach the silhouette of his sinking companion. His fingers extended outward scathing the collar of the weighed down swordsman. Sam’s chain mail garbs were sending him below at a frightening pace. Red reached out again, this time getting the man by his long tied up hair. He pulled in desperation at his unconscious partner, but it was no use; with every inch he gained, he lost more. *You said you wouldn’t die. Not now, not now!* Red thought. Like a strike of lightening Red was overcome with an idea. Sam winced and suddenly thrashed about. Red’s teeth were embedded into Sam’s neck. The writhing of the larger blacksmith, alerted Red to release his bite. Together both men, discarded their metal trappings and kicked fiercely toward the surface.

“I’m not going to last much longer, I’ll admit that.” huffed Garrinski. Lyod turned back to the older man, spinning his circular contraptions faster and faster as they hovered just more than a couple yards away. “But I know you’ve sensed something in me as I have you. A familiar feeling, that connection, you know what I’m talking about.” Garrinski paused and inhaled deeply.

The first circular blade struck out at Garrinski with incredible speed and rotation. Buzzing could be heard by everyone on board. Garrinski kicked up a dormant sword from the deck and wielded it in his hand to quickly deflect the incoming disk. Sparks erupted fiercely as the plate continued to spin and push against the metal blade. Finally Garrinski jumped out of the path of the projectile and taunted Lyod with an outstretched steel weapon.

“You think a blade can be harm me? Are you mad?” Lyod questioned, slowly drawing both his hands in the direction of Garrinski.

“If you can take this blade from my hands, I promise this fight will end.” Garrinski announced, narrowing his eyes at the hovering Admiral.

Lyod’s hands began to shift as a strong force pulled at Garrinski’s weapon. Dropping his staff Garrinski secured the hilt of the sword in both hands. He could feel the immense force dragging his form across the deck. With the loss of inches and now feet between the two men, Garrinski shut his eyes and began to focus intently on the object in hands.

*I can’t hold it much longer. It’s just getting stronger. The closer I get the harder it is to pull back.* Garrinski thought. Suddenly he stopped. Standing in place, completely still, Garrinski was exhaling in calm steady breaths. Everyone felt baffled by the sight before them. Lyod was the first to speak out.

“What are you doing?” Lyod asked with a mix of inquisition and anger. He clenched his hands together, causing the sword in his victim’s hand to shake violently. “What is holding you down?!”

“He’s nearly there. He’s almost using his full power.” came the voice to Garrinski’s ears.

*Alright, I’m ready* thought Garrinski. He tightened his grip and attempted to steady the blade best he could. Beads of sweat cascaded down the older man’s forehead. His arms were incredibly strained and looked similarly intense. *I just have to aim this just….right….a-a-and…NOW!* Both hands released the sword at once and a visible shockwave threw Garrinski unto his back. The sword flew with unsurpassed momentum directly at Lyod.

Realizing his predicament Lyod had no time to think and could only react to the incoming weapon by attempting to reverse the immense force he had just used to withdraw it from the opponent’s hands, but it was too late. Impaled through the chest, the floating Admiral feel to the deck of the passenger ship. The pirates who had been watching the battle ensue, quickly ran aboard the nearby ship, clamoring to command it to set sail. Lyod rested on his back staring up at the starry evening sky. Slowly the blade in his chest was being withdrawn by an invisible force. The blade made it no more than a few inches, before Lyod yielded and rested his entire body on the deck, lowering both arms.

The Legacy crew reunited on the deck of the passenger ship and began to approach the fallen Admiral, following Garrinski’s firm advance. The pirate ship Enunu, was sailing away amid the quiet gathering.

“H-howwww…is this p-p-possible?” Lyod cried. “What power was that?”

Even the Legacy crew members were now staring at Garrinski as if to ask their own unanswered questions.

“You could sense it. As we all could. I’ll try to explain it in terms you can understand.” Garrinski took a moment to think. “You should know even a power such as magnetism relies on three things to determine it’s force. There’s the mass of the object being pulled, the force exerted on that object, and the distance that object travels.”

“What does that have to do with anything? Why did the sword come a-at me so fas-s, f-fast?” Lyod eyes were glaring at the his killer now.

“I have no control over objects or forces…, but distances… distances seem to be easier to change…from there I almost can’t explain it myself.” Garrinski said. Bending over he picked up his staff and looked over his comrades. Some looked tired, others enraged, some misplaced. “There’s nothing more for us to do here today.”

“Wait!” Lyod cried out. “You fools have no idea what is out there d-do you?”

Vash sneered at this remark and readied himself to finish off the fallen Admiral, but he was stopped by the massive arm of Nicholas.

“Let him speak his words. Every man is entitled their say on their deathbed.” Nicholas said, staring coldly at Lyod.

“F-fools, I say. Perhaps I was not ready to j-join the ranks of the Immortals, b-b..,” Lyod gasped for air, “but believe me there are men out on those oceans that transcend all mortal ability. W-when you cross them, your graves will be below the waters you sail. If only you knew of the [/I]C-circle of Seven[/I], you’d turn around and go back to your lives.” Lyod’s eyes began to still and he exhaled one last time. The Admiral of the Guillotine of the White Sea was no more.

Eyes suddenly turned from the scene at the front of the ship to still men in front of the main hall. The young boy who had emerged minutes ago from the interior of the ship, knelt of Flashy’s immobile body. Filled with watery drops of regret, the sight of this small person was being blurred. Looking over his rescuer’s lifeless form, he felt a tightening in his heart. Any fear he once possessed, for this demonic creature of a man, was viciously being drowned away by a river of sorrow. A voice filled the evening air and all listened to the quiet ballad that came to be:

‘Pass the tides return again
The truth abides in fuller reefs.
With the blessed sacraments
Man shall return from the deep.

Quell the waves and rest for now
The hands of Him reside among
To the first with saintly thirst
Praise be upon tis song tos’ sung’


The crew fell deathly quiet and a deep unwanted feeling scurried around amongst their stomachs. The sound of crying from the very young looking man eerily tainted the mood even more. He sang again, between his fits of weeping. Beautiful as his voice was, the ache growing among the crew couldn’t be resolved as easily. One voice finally emerged from the almost silent crowd.

“Don’t waste such pretty words on me,” Flashy weakly said.

-End of Chapter 14
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  Posted on April 22, 2009 01:31
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I gotta say, you're a pretty good writer. The sentences flow really smoothly and the action actually makes sense.. admittedly I haven't read anything else you wrote so I have absolutely no idea of what's going on. But that's my fault - not yours. Keep your hands typing and your pen moving on the pages man!
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Amazing i must admit i didnt read all the way through but this looks pretty good from the start! Keep up the good work man! :blink
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  Posted on April 22, 2009 19:38
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You pwn, Daw. I've read through every single chapter, and they kicked ass. The circle of seven... I'm going to have a wild guess and say they're either like the Shishibukai (7 warlords) in One Piece OR a force that controls the Immortals.

10/10, Dawsoe.
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  Posted on April 23, 2009 02:08
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grassmaster wrote:
You pwn, Daw. I've read through every single chapter, and they kicked ass. The circle of seven... I'm going to have a wild guess and say they're either like the Shishibukai (7 warlords) in One Piece OR a force that controls the Immortals.

10/10, Dawsoe.

Lol, these are the types of replies I like. I do appreciate "ernest" feedback about wanting to read more, but to the few that have actually gone through the completed work so far, I'm glad to hear everything is sounding at least somewhat comprehensible and put together at this point.

Circle of Seven, eh? People, places, or things? That would definately need to be the first question answered, when it's brought up again ;P A great idea to speculate though, since now the only thing we know about what/who it could be is the name of it and a man's desire to seek it out.

I just hope more people become encouraged to undertake a bit of *ahem* light reading. I do understand this is the longest ongoing original work, that's exlusively home to these boards, but I don't think it's a stretch to say it would well be worth the time to sit down and go through. The Legacy has definately made writing alot more fun lately for me. I'll continue pursuing this story throughout my college career and perhaps beyond, so at the very least it will keep my technique sharpened.
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