Poem: A Special He

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Posted on April 18, 2009 06:42

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Anyway, guys, I just made a poem. We were supposed to make a poem that was about our child to teen years.

WARNING: I suck at poems.

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Here it is:

A Special He

Born on a shadowy dusk,
On the seventh of the months,
In the Pearl of the Orient,
Or the country called the Philippines.

When the sands of time poured,
The infant became a boy,
The child who wore glasses
Since his seventh year of birth.

After fourteen years,
He was still short;
He was scared of his height,
Wondered if he will grow taller.

He asks himself a lot.
He wants to be taller.
He grew a little;
Yet still not enough.

Being fond of meeting acquaintances,
He soon had friends.
He also loved literature,
Either writing or reading.

He works as hard as a farmer,
But sometimes he crams.
Sometimes he enjoys sarcasm,
And from time to time, he acts as pessimist.

He loves being with people he loves,
Either family or friends.
The guy likes to flirt;
Sometimes for fun, and sometimes for something else.

He thinks of himself as the color red.
He can easily adapt to any situation,
Like red matches any other color.
Similar to red, his moods has many shades.

When this teen closes his eyes,
He sees himself in a courtroom.
Not as the one who�s pleading guilty,
But the man who fights for justice that�s due.

Another gaze into the future is himself,
Sitting on a desk with a fountain pen.
Beside him a computer and paper.
He grew to be a dazzling writer.

His memories, his love,
His faith, his determination
Is what drives him to walk,
To walk the road of life.

Who is this he?
He is a special he.
�Tis I, Raymond.
That�s who.

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Posted on April 18, 2009 06:45

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Thats Awesome! So Much Talent 8/10!

Posted on April 18, 2009 06:46

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Nice poem. I thought it'd be you. 9/10. It lacks a rhythm

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Posted on April 18, 2009 06:47

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Quote by vaizard1324

Nice poem. I thought it'd be you. 9/10. It lacks a rhythm

Thankies. But it's free-verse.

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Posted on April 18, 2009 06:58

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its kool 9/10

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Posted on April 18, 2009 08:28

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Quote by soul-collector

its kool 9/10

Thanks.

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Posted on April 18, 2009 08:30

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Iambic pentameter.
Good job!
That was tiiiight!

Sometimes words get in the way.

Posted on April 18, 2009 08:32

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Quote by Asuika

Iambic pentameter.
Good job!
That was tiiiight!

Thankies! I hope I get an A in this!

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Posted on April 19, 2009 00:14

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Quote by Asuika

Iambic pentameter.
Good job!
That was tiiiight!

This isn't in iambic pentameter.

I could tell the poem was about you almost immediately.

Poem: A Special He

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