Quote by solewind Your Haiku's are a work of art.
They're short, simple, and elegant.
Very nice.
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Your poems are different, but very nice as well. They have much deeper meaning than one might think.
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Your stories are wonderful! They draw me in, and make me want to read more!
Keep up the excellent work.
~Sole
OMFG. Thank you very much.
That means a lot coming from you. =D
Anyway, I added a new poem:
Sword (Real Title at the Bottom because it is a spoiler.)
Behind every sword is a man.
Behind every man is a sword.
Why, you ask? Why?
Man could not have survived all this time without a sword,
And the sword cannot function without a man.
A sword is trustworthy.
Trust it, and it will not defy you.
Like a friend, it is both loyal and truthful.
It will remain at your side at all times.
Leave it and it will slowly rust.
A sword has a shiny blade.
A blade that reflects the light.
It is shiny and bright.
It stands out with most weapons.
It is also sharp and smart.
A sword has a handle-the hilt.
The hilt is golden.
It eliminates godly essences.
It is rejuvenating and refreshing.
Hold it tight and it will help you.
A sword has a blade.
A blade that is strong.
It has suffered many clashes and struggles.
It had endured all turbulent times.
A sword can be clean or dirty.
It can have the most beautiful blade,
Silver and gleaming in the sun.
Sometimes, it is full or blood,
Its moods are different, angered or sad.
A sword can be very helpful or very destructive.
Swing it wildly at enemies, it will prove to be blight.
Hold it for your defense, and it will save you.
A protector and a friend,
The sword will guard you.
A sword is many things.
One of them…
Is me.
I am your sword.
I am the sword.
~This poem is full of metaphors. I quite like it. One of my best, I would say. Title is last line.
Woot. =)
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Topic: Raymond's Writing Showcase
Posted on May 7, 2009 04:09
