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Posted on April 18, 2009 05:24

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omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i like the LOVE ONE

lol y am I not suprised. Nice Hyuuga

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Posted on April 18, 2009 06:39

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@SK: Thankies!

Anyway, guys, I just made a poem. We were supposed to make a poem that was about our child to teen years.

Goals, looks, and etcetera.

Here it is:

A Special He

Born on a shadowy dusk,
On the seventh of the months,
In the Pearl of the Orient,
Or the country called the Philippines.

When the sands of time poured,
The infant became a boy,
The child who wore glasses
Since his seventh year of birth.

After fourteen years,
He was still short;
He was scared of his height,
Wondered if he will grow taller.

He asks himself a lot.
He wants to be taller.
He grew a little;
Yet still not enough.

Being fond of meeting acquaintances,
He soon had friends.
He also loved literature,
Either writing or reading.

He works as hard as a farmer,
But sometimes he crams.
Sometimes he enjoys sarcasm,
And from time to time, he acts as pessimist.

He loves being with people he loves,
Either family or friends.
The guy likes to flirt;
Sometimes for fun, and sometimes for something else.

He thinks of himself as the color red.
He can easily adapt to any situation,
Like red matches any other color.
Similar to red, his moods has many shades.

When this teen closes his eyes,
He sees himself in a courtroom.
Not as the one who�s pleading guilty,
But the man who fights for justice that�s due.

Another gaze into the future is himself,
Sitting on a desk with a fountain pen.
Beside him a computer and paper.
He grew to be a dazzling writer.

His memories, his love,
His faith, his determination
Is what drives him to walk,
To walk the road of life.

Who is this he?
He is a special he.
�Tis I, Raymond.
That�s who.

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Posted on April 18, 2009 06:55

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Really nice showcase, Hyuuga!

I look forward to seeing more!

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Posted on April 18, 2009 06:58

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Really nice showcase, Hyuuga!

I look forward to seeing more!

Thanks, bro.

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Posted on April 19, 2009 01:04

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Abortion is wrong

but nice poems

Posted on April 19, 2009 01:30

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Hey, guys. I made another fan-fic. Check it out:

Harry Potter and the Ressurection ~ On-going.
--> Another fan-fic based on Harry Potter. The storyline is based off after the seventh book. This story will involve action, magic o.o, romance, friendship and a lot more. Start reading this story and have fun!

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Posted on April 24, 2009 06:10

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~BUMP~

I just wrote three Haikus:

Forest Fires
Glowing embers dance.
Fire encircled the forest.
Orange beasts eat trees.

Summer Fun
Summer is up now.
Swim and play in the beach sun.
Dance and have fun now.

Sun
Rising and blinding,
The sun stretches out its hands.
It embraces you.

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Posted on April 27, 2009 03:20

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Hyuuga, I love your poetry, very inspiring and thoughtful. I have yet to read your fanfics but I shall do so right now and when I have time to do so.Keep it up man. Great showcase.

~Dsk.

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Posted on April 27, 2009 05:59

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Hyuuga, I love your poetry, very inspiring and thoughtful. I have yet to read your fanfics but I shall do so right now and when I have time to do so.Keep it up man. Great showcase.

~Dsk.

Wow. Thank you. That counts a lot coming from a great writer like you.

Thank you.

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~Update: Another set of three Haikus:

Reflection
The bird flapped its wings.
The beauty-the golden beak,
Reflected nature.

Castles
Mountains are castles.
Animals, humans, creatures,
Live on them brightly.

Blanket
The blue sky blankets
The world with its own cotton,
The pretty white clouds.

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Posted on April 29, 2009 01:42

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Only cool kids like this kind of writing.

If you're wondering why I'm not on so much.

Posted on April 29, 2009 01:46

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@Adrian: Thanks.

Anyway, I specifically made a section for Haiku now...

Yayz. Updated. =)

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Posted on April 30, 2009 02:44

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~BUMP~

I have made a super short story. It was for TheInfected.

Titled, "THE SSC".

Check it out: Click.

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Posted on April 30, 2009 18:30

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Double post.

If you're wondering why I'm not on so much.

Posted on April 30, 2009 19:56

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Double post.

Spamming.

Lols. I didn't double post. It was a bump. =D

Anyways, any suggestions on what I should write?

I am still updating some of the fan-fics.

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Posted on May 7, 2009 03:57

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Your Haiku's are a work of art.

They're short, simple, and elegant.

Very nice.
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Your poems are different, but very nice as well. They have much deeper meaning than one might think.

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Your stories are wonderful! They draw me in, and make me want to read more!

Keep up the excellent work.

~Sole

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